Tennon's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mm2x2-Chocolate Cake]

I fucking love it

mm2x2 responds:

Thank you very much <3

[Mm2x2-Death Dance]

Since I do speak Japanese, the japanese stuff should be 死の舞 (shi no mai). And yeah the vocals in the middle were actually funny af lol. Id be really happy to be your vocalist if you intend to troll the shit out of it.

Its probably the funniest song out there lmao im having period cramps fml

mm2x2 responds:

Japanese= not 100, and sure! I would like to create more troll-y stuff in the future, I love working with other people, you can msg me here or on discord, and thanks, I didn't realize that it was that funny xD

[Tennobyte - Big Adventure]

Watch out your compression! Nice melody!
Your name is so similar to mine lmao

Tennobyte responds:

BuT OtT iS iMpOrTaNt!!!
Also thank you, and lol you're right.

[Dubstep Stuff]

Y'est où le drop? Mdr j'utilise pas le google traduction, chuis Canadienne #-#

X3LL3N responds:

Cool !
Pour l'instant je suis en train de faire la partie qui précède cette audio, ensuite mon ami GDTrickshot s'occupera du drop :)

[Drumstep Experiment]

Ton kick et snare pourraient être plus forts, le reste est fucking bon!

X3LL3N responds:

Merci, après je me demande si ce commentaire est juste un mélange d'anglais et de français ou alors un fail de google traduction xD

[SaZyK - Heaven [Dubstep]]

It was a long time since I reviewed your work, so lemme do it now...
Nice melody first, I had to drop that
There are definitely stuff that you can improve. I was listening it with shitty headphones cuz the good one is under repair. Hence I won’t be commenting on the mixing
Pros:
- Good melody, really melodic and heavenly
- Heavy drop
- Nice song structure
Cons:
- Do not overuse compression. Sometimes you have to use distortion as a way of mastering.
- The piano section is a bit too distorted, it should be a bit less loud.
- The sidechain isn’t obvious enough. It should really make your drums punchy.
- My biggest complaint is there are mediant minor chords followed immediately by tonic major chords. It sounds a bit off. The mediant minor chords sounds best followed by submediant chords (aka minor tonic) or supertonic major chords (aka dorian chords). My bad if this is too subjective but I’ll just throw it here.

Lastly, this has nothing to do with the score, I feel like this isn’t really riddim cuz the snares in the drop aren’t layered with kicks.

SaZyK responds:

Yes, thank you very much, I love knowing that you liked it and receiving your advice helps me a lot, I hope to improve in the field of mixing 7u7

[Code-y]

Au5 Freefall sample pack!
But I would love to hear more of your own sounds!

Lubloom responds:

Yeah I love that pack, mostly for the drum loop from Emergence because it has the nicest cymbal pattern. I used 4 brief samples from emergence and the rest are my own

[Not Alone]

Nice house, love the use of triplets! Also great vocal chops!
I would’ve preferred a drop somewhere

Lubloom responds:

Thanks! I've never really used triplets before. That vocal chop was a complete accident too, made it out of the main vocal. I would have put a drop in but I thought it was best without one for this song