Tennon's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Not Now]

This sounds exactly like a dubstep in the 90s. And we dont want that, the melody is a bit too repetitve, try to diversify it. And remember, melody+noise isnt a drop, a drop is an alternence of melody and wub/growls, you cant fill every place with noise and melody, because one can disturb another. If the wub disturbs the melody or vice versa, try to separate them. Sidenote: you are improving

[Xtrullor & Hex Eater - Soulstorm]

This is better than Earthsplitter and Supernova, but Ichor is always the best!

[Xtrullor - Earthsplitter]

This should be used in a movie trailer

[Blue Room]

This is much better than your first song! Wow, the melody is very beautiful and the rhythm is very well mastered! The only thing that dosent quite work is the noises in the drop, I know that dubstep has these wubs, but the wubs arent the main part of the drop (except for some particular songs). Dont fit every space with wubs, that wont sound good, just fill where you need. Also the song needs more mastering but mastering often comes with experience.

PS: How old are you? I am 14

PhiV3rn responds:

I'm 13 :D

[Impact]

Um ok, first of all, a dubstep track is never shorter than 2min, and the tempo is a lot faster then 140 bpm. The rhythm is good, very bouncy and hype, but the melody is detuned and too simple, no changes in the notes. If this had a slower tempo, longer and the melody is more complex, it would be a lot better. But don't worry, I know that it is your first submission and you will improve from now on!

[TheFatRat - Monody (feat. Laura Brehm)]

You just inspired me

[Feint - Unwanted]

Holy this is amazing! I am Chinese and when I listen to this it gives me a wonderful feeling!

[Intensity]

I came to rate 5/5

Noisysundae responds:

Thanks a lot, brother. :)

[Drum N Bass 1]

The same thing here, look at my review for your other song, I will come again and scout you when you become better!

[Dubstep 1 FULL]

This review is for you to make a better song so dont take it as an insult :)

First of all, it has a very repetitive, there is no drop and no ending, the same thing is repeting everywhere, you should maybe add some more changes into it, an intense drop for example. Secondly, you need to add more instruments into the composition, a synth lead or a piano for example. Finally, I understand that you are only 13 yrs old and it is pretty surprising that a person as young as you can make such thing like this, but remember, you can always do better, I am 14 and yeah me too I aint very very excellent with music.

Mineblaze responds:

Thank you for your advice! OK, I will use piano for my next song. For this I used a dubstep tutorial (How to make your first dubstep). And I will say you what I am Russian. And... (read only if you want to play some not very good levels) if you are good GD player, please play my levels.
Thank you!